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Blackrose and the characters herein aren’t based on anyone living or dead, (or undead). Furthermore, this fiction is not based on actual events, if they are, it is purely accidental. I retain all rights to the original characters and work. Any recreation without consent is PROHIBITED! That said, Sailor Moon and the anime’s characters ARE NOT owned by me, money isn’t made by me from their use.

 

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Before reading, I decided to go with the unedited Japanese version of Sailor Moon and the dubbed version, for names, don’t kick me. Please enjoy and give me thoughts and feedback. 🙂

 

“Time wasn’t on his side, one fact Xavior clung to as he sat back on his knees, the Kahimoto sheathed, as if he was giving in. “Blackrose, I won’t fear what I am anymore, you will be proud when you awaken, my dark cat!” he muttered as he saw her smiling in his head, like he connected to her again right before standing and crossing blades with the inner version of himself that tried coming up behind. Now, he wasn’t about to let his nature control him, not now that he finally found what he lost, and it was time to rise and claim the power she gave him, making Xavior disappear, meeting his nature’s blows with his, ending with the demon half at his feet.

 

Nothing was said for minutes on end, having Blackrose’s husband think his nature was plotting but as it looked at him, it saw what the vampire cat fell in love with return to the man. The vampire side knew that the last few seconds they traded blows wasn’t easy on either of them, the slow healing scars were proof of that, making it chuckle before it said, “And THERE it is, I knew we still had that in us!” in a demonic tone, though Xavior couldn’t help but note a little praise at the end. As the nature stood, it added, “Never forget, I’m a part of you!” coldly, as if the being wanted to say, “Slip, and I’ll control you.”, a warning affirming the vampire feline mate’s resolve.

 

Xavior wasn’t going to forget that again, making him nod before the entity disappeared back into him. Once it did, he felt the vampire side surface, controlled, the power at his fingertips. If a word could be used to describe the feeling, it’d be intoxicating, having the undead man chuckle demonically, wanting to run wild and unleash it, but Xavior knew better. Turning, though time for him and the nature’s words and battle slowed, Blackrose’s mate saw a few men, no doubt this Queen Beryl’s soldiers in the room and Fujiko about to strike, compelling a dark smirk to appear across his face before snapping his fingers to unfreeze time and use Kahimoto to slash a few men in half.

 

Though she only caught what seemed like a blur, or in other words, a shadow step, Fujiko saw her friend’s husband in front of her, blood of the fallen men all over him. It couldn’t be ignored that Xavior communed with the inner vampire and fought against it, but she wasn’t sure which stood before her, making her fur stand up. Sure, the feline needed to know, this wasn’t the time to ask however, having the woman ready herself for the next set of men, but as soon as they entered the room and saw their fallen comrades, fear froze them in place, looking at her lord.

 

“What the hell is this guy?!” one asked, disbelief all over his question, making a bit of horror’s chill knock at the door. Before the dark queen’s man could consider moving, Xavior appeared face to face with him and broke him in half over his head, drinking the blood that washed over him. After, Blackrose’s newly revived mate, saw his sword’s aura build, as if the blade wanted to feed, but it seemed different in a way, as if Kahimoto, the half demonic of the blade spirit spoke to his counter part, compelling Xavior to draw it.

 

Looking at it then the over three soldiers, it took little to deduce what it silently told the man, growing the smirk on his face. The fight to get back to Ervere, to Blackrose and his daughters needed a hand, and there was no way around that, having the vampire shadow step and take out the last two men, watching what seemed like blood though quite darker than crimson start to encase the steel of the weapon before slashing the air over a few of the corpses, letting what the Kahimoto had around it splatter into the bodies. “Fujiko, I can sense your worry. Don’t be afraid, I’ve found myself and am in control.” her friend and lord said calmly, the vampire tone in his voice, letting the blacksmith smile.

 

Watching the matter from Xavior’s sword move into the dead and having what looked like fangs appear on their foreheads, it became clear the spirit attached to the blade knew they didn’t have Cerberus and revealed one ability to the man. As the dead stood, one by one knelt before Blackrose’s mate, silently swearing loyalty to him, having Fujiko sheathe her weapon and stand next to Xavior, readying herself for the next step. Little needed saying, the feline blacksmith heard the screams and more coming from the thrown room, screams that made her ears twitch.

 

“Once we get out there, go to your queen’s side Luna.” Xavior said as he looked at the cat, the vampire within possibly bleeding through more than it should and perhaps scaring the adviser. That could’ve been worded more delicately, he admitted, but in times like this, things had to be done quickly, something the feline knew from her nod. Nobody could deny this was a moment that could turn the tide in favor of the moon kingdom, not to mention would send the two misplaced warriors home, Fujiko and Xavior knew that, having both walking through the door into chaos, Queen Serenity’s feline and the mindless thrall’s of the vampire following.

 

As soon as Xavior and his feline entered the next room, the vampire’s aura could be felt, sending waves of icy shivers though both factions, but Zoisite, the cowardly warrior of Queen Beryl decided to step forward. “What are you doing?! You were sent in to kill the warrior and his friend!” she said demanding an answer, unaware of what the seemingly living soldiers went through. Perhaps the blank gaze they gave off or Xavior himself made a chill come over the man but he drew his sword, watching Blackrose’s mate as he broke from his friend, something making Zoisite weak.

 

“Fujiko, I will take this filth personally, you and my recruits can have them.” Xavior said in a chuckle, letting the vampire nature through to speak as he pointed to a group of soldiers, most likely directing his slaves. Slowly unsheathing the Kahimoto sword, the undead man never lost sight of the worthless waste before him, entertaining what he might torment the being with. Oh, killing him then making the coward serve as a dog crossed his mind, Xavior wasn’t about to lie and say otherwise, but the smell of Zoisite’s cowardliness made him want to vomit. Nobody saw, maybe Blackrose’s husband shadow stepped so fast that Queen Beryl’s warrior didn’t see his weapon shatter and the vampire grabbing him by the throat, throwing him against a window, killing him.”

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Personal Blog Jan. 1ST 2019!

Okay to begin, I’m happy 2018’s over, done and in the books because the last two months of it were a cluster bleep for me. Hope you all had a happy holiday season, getting all you wanted, caught up with friends & family, all the good stuff! 🙂 Anyone eat well, over eat what? Shadowlight wants to know! ^_^

Alright, I’ve been keeping low & hermitting a lot, but I’ve been reading a few of your posts, so I’m not dead. Why was I away and not posting? Issues, stress and family bull! See, before Thanksgiving, my nephew asked me to help him by being a witness in his custody case for his kids. My feelings for kids aside, because I don’t care for children, especially these bad ass kids, people treat me like I have no mind, talking to me like I’m slow etc. When I tried moving out of state years back, that happened, having me sent back here, but that story can wait. If I were to go, which thankfully, I don’t, but if I did, I don’t speak well in public, get me?

 

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As of late, the writing bug hit and has me working stories both old and new, and even the Sailor Moon crossover, which is 95% complete. I’m in the final battle sequence, so after that and editing of the first pages of the piece, it’ll be done! 🙂 Do you readers/followers wanna peek?

An anime topic is coming soon…:) Let us hope for all of us bloggers, 2019’s a good year!

Proofread A Sneak Peek Anyone?

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All original stories, characters posted and mentioned here, (other than the Sailor Moon characters) are owned by me, please do not repost them without my expressed permission, thanks!!

There has been something I’ve sat on, not doing a thing with for a while because, A: Laziness and B: debate on if I ended the scene too quickly. Think it has been put out there that characters should NOT be given weapons, powers etc. without trials that they must complete, if abilities are just given, that character becomes “Hollow” & boring.

Most of you know I’ve been writing a crossover between the 90s version of Sailor Moon for months and the novel I’m writing. I’m more than half done with the story, but below is a fight scene between Xavior’s vampire self an him, but is it too short? Would you let me know what you think please? 🙂

“Xavior and Fujiko walked into a room, more than likely a guest room, waiting for the feline adviser before shutting and locking themselves in. The man knew how to begin down the path of communing with his inner vampire, Blackrose taught him how to perform the ritual before she fought that mage, knowledge having him take the Kahimoto sword sheathe with the weapon in it off his back and set it in front of him after sitting cross legged. After a pause, probably to get what he needed to say to the part he imprisoned together, Xavior started to chant in a forgotten tongue, going into a trance soon after.

 

Heeding the feline warrior’s words, Luna remained still like a statue, unsure of their motives, but the adviser didn’t want to risk anything if what she heard was true. Though it might’ve been her imagination or maybe her eyes playing tricks on her, she wasn’t sure, she just knew some black mist started to form around the male warrior, giving the cat reason to move, yet she did nothing. Strange wouldn’t even touch the situation, making Queen Serenity’s adviser think the two could be from the Negaforce, but that wouldn’t explain them aiding the queen or what his friend told the prince, letting the thought that they were spies vanish.

 

While chanting, Xavior couldn’t ignore the misty presence that formed across from him, he couldn’t really, compelling Blackrose’s mate to open his eyes. Even though what peered at him seemed like a normal warrior, the Izurian knew better, having the man sigh, but before he could say a thing, the entity jumped and tackled him before saying, “I’m a part of you?! Don’t make me laugh, you’re weak!!” in anger, a bit of rage fueled that as it growled demonically, baring it’s fangs. It made Xavior’s nature quite sick knowing Blackrose gifted the man looking back immortality, only to deny what he was, making the vampire form add, “Stupid child, you’ve lost what our Sire fell in love with. Perhaps I should take over and kill these people and return home by her side!” the anger and demonic overtone more pronounced on that last part, but after it said that something hit Xavior, making him grab the monster’s arm, forcing it to let go.

 

“If you kill these people, how will you get home to Ervere since this world’s queen is the only one who can send us back?” Xavior asked, pointing out the obvious to his other half, but knew better. It could’ve been the memory of how Blackrose was before they fell in love that ignited fire within him to fight back, but her mate wasn’t about to let his nature’s blood lust rule him, making him pickup the Kahimoto sword. True, perhaps he was a child who feared that side of himself, Xavior admitted that, even though it hurt to do so, but at the time, he couldn’t commune with the inner vampire and if any part of the man made up the being, it had to know that fact.

 

“Hmph worm, are you going to fight me now?” the demonic side of the man asked smugly, looking at him drawing the blade. It knew what this weak version was attempting, that went without saying, having the thrill of battle come to it, but the vampire had no plan to let the pitiful version of itself just use the abilities it had then go back to neglecting what he was. No, though a blood thirsty entity, wanting to control Xavior, it was still him in a sense and had a bit of honor, a fact making it give him a test, one that if he should lose, well.

 

As he looked at his vampire self, he knew this was a battle he couldn’t afford losing, an admission making Blackrose’s mate take a stance. There wasn’t time for a long drawn out inner battle with his inner vampire, Xavior knew that, but he also knew that if he should lose, the vampire would take control, not unlike Bloodrose did to his wife before she settled things with it, one thing he couldn’t allow to happen. Though it seemed like forever, the time came when the two took off after the other, crossing swords with a mighty clang, both not giving up ground.

 

Though separated from the man, holding most of his unnatural strength, it impressed Xavior’s demonic half that he still had a lot of power behind him, having it grin. “Very good, you might be worthy enough to keep pace with me now, but for how long?” the entity asked in a cocky tone as it parted, a cackle couldn’t be missed while resetting a stance. How many ways to get rid of the baggage that stood there were overflowing in the demon’s head, making the expression on it’s face darken. Just taking control and dominating him, like the evil did to Blackrose for centuries seemed like a good option, though a bit less fun, but a way came to the forefront, getting the man’s nature excited before vanishing.

 

Time wasn’t on his side, one fact Xavior clung to as he sat back on his knees, the Kahimoto sheathed, as if he was giving in. “Blackrose, I won’t fear what I am anymore, you will be proud when you awaken, my dark cat!” he muttered as he saw her smiling in his head, like he connected to her again right before standing and crossing blades with the inner version of himself that tried coming up behind. Now, he wasn’t about to let his nature control him, not now that he finally found what he lost, and it was time to rise and claim the power she gave him, making Xavior disappear, meeting his nature’s blows with his, ending with the demon half at his feet.

 

Nothing was said for minutes on end, having Blackrose’s husband think his nature was plotting but as it looked at him, it saw what the vampire cat fell in love with return to the man. The vampire side knew that the last few seconds they traded blows wasn’t easy on either of them, the slow healing scars were proof of that, making it chuckle before it said, “And THERE it is, I knew we still had that in us!” in a demonic tone, though Xavior couldn’t help but note a little praise at the end. As the nature stood, it added, “Never forget, I’m apart of you!” coldly, as if the being wanted to say, “Slip, and I’ll control you.”, a warning affirming the vampire feline mate’s resolve.

 

Xavior wasn’t going to forget that again, making him nod before the entity disappeared back into him.”

Personal Blog For November 2010

Welcome to November’s mind cleansing, where it’ll start out with some rant, but before that… After ya read this, please meet Crystalania, a friend of my elf princess Skya, but she’s going insane! “Why you might ask?” A mage tricked her into retrieving a cursed item, and that curse infected Crystalania’s mind, having her enjoy killing.

Okay, now the gaming rant. There are people who are crying about players who use created characters in Soul Cal 6, saying it’s not fair, they can’t see the weapons, the hitboxes are crazy and that creations should be banned from ranked matches. Meow,if you look at it from the damn post I put up Friday? It is a form of censorship and doesn’t make a lot of sense! I’ve fought a Pac-Man with a big ass face and I could see the weapon! There was salt, but it was only because the player was a scrub & spammed to stay at the top of the lobby.

Even a player from the fighting game community circuit is calling for the ban, however this may land me in hot water, but, man can I point somethings out to you? I’m not trying to get on your bad side here, however FGC person, in a match, don’t you have to ADAPT to who & what you’re fighting? It’s one of the first rules you learn, no? Crying and moaning like this serves nobody, it only makes people look like five year olds who cannot play with others. Are you five, or whatever age you are? Stop pissing and moaning and adapt!

 

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When I create my fighters, most of em are the recommended height, only Mei Xing, (above) is slightly shorter due to her age,17-18, but she can go toe to toe with anyone, I don’t care, end of rant! 🙂

 

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Other news: I’m ever so close to overhauling my gaming/work rig that me mouth is watering! Most of the parts were ordered last month, Windows 10 was shipped yesterday, along with blank DVDS for backing up files. All I need to get is the motherboard, cpu and memory, then I’m golden. 🙂 Shooting to get the last of the parts by my birthday next month, which would be a great b-day gift for myself!

 

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Anime news: I threw Black Clover on the ground and ran that incest freak what’s his face over after slamming his face into the curb. Yes, I no longer wanna watch that series due to that character making my skin crawl and the anime, characters seem so blah? Anyone else feel the same?

More Black Clover Flaws!

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While it isn’t a secret that I’m not the biggest fan of Black Clover with all the flaws I see. Perhaps being a writer & think the main character asta, (butchered his name), should put in a bit more progress before getting new swords, but this post isn’t about him.

I could harp on a list of characters that have traits that come off as annoying as sh*t, there are a few, but one character makes me cringe and skin crawl. Every time Gauche talks about his sister, it gives off a creepy vibe with me, & when his nose bleeds when doing so, I do wonder what da heck the writers are going for. So, am I reading too into this, is it incest or just a deep brother/sister bond? Please let me know because I seriously want to drop the anime if it is that incest thing.

Yes, I’ve seen some weird anime situations in my time, but how Gauche comes across….

Would Anyone Rate This?

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All original stories, characters posted and mentioned here are owned by me, unless stated otherwise. Please do not repost them without my expressed permission, thanks!!

 

So, don’t ask me why my muses kick my brain & urge me to write between 2-5am, having me hit works hard, making me a zombie the next day, but they do, (think they love to torturing me, lol 🙂 ) Anyway, late Monday, a turning point in the Sailor Moon crossover was made and I’d like to get feedback on the lead up to a fight before continuing. Some additional details will be added, like how Xavior and his vampire are fighting outside time, having Fujiko and Luna seem frozen, but I’d like to know if the scene below flows well and if you readers can follow what’s going on.

 

Please comment and let me know! 🙂

 

“Xavior and Fujiko walked into a room, more than likely a guest room, waiting for the feline adviser before shutting and locking themselves in. The man knew how to begin down the path of communing with his inner vampire, Blackrose taught him how to perform the ritual before she fought that mage, knowledge having him take the Kahimoto sword sheathe with the weapon in it off his back and set it in front of him after sitting cross legged. After a pause, probably to get what he needed to say to the part he imprisoned together, Xavior started to chant in a forgotten tongue, going into a trance soon after.

 

Heeding the feline warrior’s words, Luna remained still like a statue, unsure of their motives, but the adviser didn’t want to risk anything if what she heard was true. Though it might’ve been her imagination or maybe her eyes playing tricks on her, she wasn’t sure, she just knew some black mist started to form around the male warrior, giving the cat reason to move, yet she did nothing. Strange wouldn’t even touch the situation, making Queen Serenity’s adviser think the two could be from the Negaforce, but that wouldn’t explain them aiding the queen or what his friend told the prince, letting the thought that they were spies vanish.

 

While chanting, Xavior couldn’t ignore the misty presence that formed across from him, he couldn’t really, compelling Blackrose’s mate to open his eyes. Even though what peered at him seemed like a normal warrior, the Izurian knew better, having the man sigh, but before he could say a thing, the entity jumped and tackled him before saying, “I’m a part of you?! Don’t make me laugh, you’re weak!!” in anger, a bit of rage fueled that as it growled demonically, baring it’s fangs. It made Xavior’s nature quite sick knowing Blackrose gifted the man looking back immortality, only to deny what he was, making the vampire form add, “Stupid child, you’ve lost what our Sire fell in love with. Perhaps I should take over and kill these people and return home by her side!” the anger and demonic overtone more pronounced on that last part, but after it said that something hit Xavior, making him grab the monster’s arm, forcing it to let go.

 

“If you kill these people, how will you get home to Ervere since this world’s queen is the only one who can send us back?” Xavior asked, pointing out the obvious to his other half, but knew better. It could’ve been the memory of how Blackrose was before they fell in love that ignited fire within him to fight back, but her mate wasn’t about to let his nature’s blood lust rule him, making him pickup the Kahimoto sword. True, perhaps he was a child who feared that side of himself, Xavior admitted that, even though it hurt to do so, but at the time, he couldn’t commune with the inner vampire and if any part of the man made up the being, it had to know that fact.

 

“Hmph worm, are you going to fight me now?” the demonic side of the man asked smugly, looking at him drawing the blade. It knew what this weak version was attempting, that went without saying, having the thrill of battle come to it, but the vampire had no plan to let the pitiful version of itself just use the abilities it had then go back to neglecting what he was. No, though a blood thirsty entity, wanting to control Xavior, it was still him in a sense and had a bit of honor, a fact making it give him a test, one that if he should lose, well.

 

As he looked at his vampire self, he knew this was a battle he couldn’t afford losing, an admission making Blackrose’s mate take a stance. There wasn’t time for a long drawn out inner battle with his inner vampire, Xavior knew that, but he also knew that if he should lose, the vampire would take control, not unlike Bloodrose did to his wife before she settled things with it, one thing he couldn’t allow to happen. Though it seemed like forever, the time came when the two took off after the other, crossing swords with a mighty clang, both not giving up ground.”

 

 

Help From The Anime Community?

Hi guys, Shadow here, the tired writer at the moment lol 🙂 Anyway, as I continued chipping away at the Sailor Moon crossover, it hit my brain that I might be adding a little too much adlibbing in what the original Queen Serenity’s mindset and curiosity might be. So before continuing and believing I’m doing right, thought I’d ask you readers for help.

 

Below are some recent paragraphs I’ve added to the story and they were done drawing on what I think what she may think or say/do. Does it flow? Please comment and let me know, thanks!

 

*Back on the moon, Xavior knew what he needed to do, having both him and Fujiko go before Queen Serenity. They knew if they told her the truth, it might put them in chains, and dash hope of getting back to Ervere, something that may happen if this wasn’t handled right. Hoping he wouldn’t slip, Blackrose’s mate said, “M’lady, I fear that the battle that will decide your kingdom’s fate draws near, so we need to ask a favor!” Xavior said with conviction as the second part of what he needed to ask gathered in his head. Telling her he had to go face an inner beast wouldn’t be good, but he had a cover, having the vampire’s husband add, “In our kingdom, there’s a ritual where warriors take a night to prepare for battle with deep meditation. I ask that Fujiko and I be allowed to do this.”

 

Just by reading their faces, this seemed important to them, the queen admitted, making her think. “I’m not one to refuse a request like that, but if Queen Beryl attacks while you’re doing that…” the moon’s ruler said with concern in her voice, a concern that the man before her must feel being a king himself. By his look, Queen Serenity knew Xavior had felt her worry for her people, though the two just got there, she saw things in their eyes, making her trust them. The enemy could attack at any moment, she admitted that, however these two had rituals that needed attending too as well, and by the look on Xavior’s face, they needed to be performed, having her agreed, but she added, “Let one of my advisers watch?” in a questioning tone, hoping to learn more about their customs.

 

Honestly, Blackrose’s husband wanted to refuse that request on the grounds of he didn’t know how unstable the his inner vampire would be, the refusal was valid, but he knew the queen might see through that and suspect something, having Xavior bow his head, accepting her condition. It could be said that Fujiko felt his worry, he saw her look at him out of the corner of his eye, though he had no other choice, a fact that she knew too well. As the two stood, he saw Luna, one of Queen Serenity’s advisers catching up to them, but he couldn’t think too much on that, communing with his vampire and how he’d confront it took top priority, having the man deep in thought.

 

After licking some matted hair and biting at it, ensuring that it wasn’t in a knot, Fujiko said, “Luna? When we do this, my lord needs to concentrate. He has to focus everything on what he must do.” kindly but ensuring the feline understands the situation. Taking a second to debate if she should tell the queen’s adviser the rest, a choice she knew shouldn’t need debating, but still. “Also, you’ll likely see things you might not understand, we call them inner warriors and we can control them, but if our minds are distracted, it could be bad, so stay still, alright?” the blacksmith added, unsure if she said too much, though Luna’s face told her she got the message.

Xavior and Fujiko walked into a room, more than likely a guest room, waiting for the feline adviser before shutting and locking themselves in. The man knew how to begin down the path of communing with his inner vampire, Blackrose taught him how to perform the ritual before she fought that mage, knowledge having him take the Kahimoto sword sheathe with the weapon in it off his back and set it in front of him after sitting cross legged.*